Talk:Duplicity

Improvements needed:

words/phrases that need to be simplified, explained, or replaced: romantic history, con

The sentence about the plot needs to be divided.

The word "carry" doesn't make sense here. Use a better one.

Divided plot area. Removed carry from article. Something else? Angela Maureen (talk) 23:24, 8 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

"History of love" and "have" aren't good words, either. "Romantic history" doesn't really tell us anything. Were they married betrothed, high school sweethearts, lovers, kept apart by their families, or what? What is it that they actually do with regard to the con? Not to mention that the word "con" is still there. That is not a very simple word even though it is only three characters long. It also has several meanings, none of which are straightforward enough for our readers. --Auntof6 (talk) 00:01, 9 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I removed plot entirely: too complex. Should anything else be done with this? Angela Maureen (talk) 00:26, 9 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]

I guess not. I'm disappointed that the plot was removed, but I'll move this back to mainspace. --Auntof6 (talk) 07:40, 10 September 2014 (UTC)[reply]