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PGA comments by Barras[change source]

  • First sentence: England or GB? What is better?
  • I prefer England.
  • Second sentence: The numbers are from which year?
  • 2001. I added the year into the sentence.
  • In the geography section is an error with the convert template. I don't know how to fix it.
  •  Done
  • Manchester has the highest population of students in the United Kingdom in term time. - needs a reference.
  •  Done
  • destinations - should be linked.
  •  Done
  • A section header for just a picture is a bit odd. There should be at least a few sentences.
  • Agree. I added a short paragraph about architecture style. Let me know what you think. :)
  • Not that important, but the weblink section should also use the {{Cite web|}} template.
  • Hmm..could you explain a bit more what you mean by that? I've never seen the "Other sites" section to be formatted any other way. Thanks. :) Nevermind, I see.  Done – Katerenka (talk • contribs) 22:17, 23 October 2009 (UTC)

Thats all, I think. Barras (talk) 20:53, 23 October 2009 (UTC)

Well done. Looks ok to me. Barras (talk) 21:58, 24 October 2009 (UTC)

"Because of this, much of the rain does not clear quickly." - I'm a bit confused about this. Does this mean that the rain falls for long periods of time, or that the rain that does fall accumulates on the ground for long periods of time? –Juliancolton | Talk 19:42, 25 October 2009 (UTC)

Same concern as JC. And once you know which one it is, a reference for it would be good. Also, there are still quite a few red links. At least do a few more! Yotcmdr =talk to the commander= 12:06, 28 October 2009 (UTC)