Talk:New York City English

Simplifying

complex words/phrases:

regional, dialect, association, features, densely concentrated, proper, immediate (when used the way it is here), extends, wider (when used the way it is here)

--Auntof6 (talk) 05:20, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

I changed most of the wording. Anything else? Angela Maureen (talk) 14:27, 10 March 2016 (UTC)

Are there more words to simplify, or is the article ready? Angela Maureen (talk) 04:19, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

Yes, there are more words to simplify. I've struck out the ones that are taken care of. By the way, please give me some time to reply when you ask something. I'm not on Wikipedia 24 hours a day. I suggest waiting at least a day between trying to remind me that you're waiting, preferably longer. This isn't a race: there's no reason it has to be done immediately. --Auntof6 (talk) 04:58, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

I have changed the words extends, association and concentrated. Is there anything else? Angela Maureen (talk) 05:24, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

Just one, that I missed before. You changed "certain features" to "some styles". "Some styles" doesn't make sense there, so you need to find another way to say that. --Auntof6 (talk) 07:23, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

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I've changed some styles to some behaviors. Is that good enough? Angela Maureen (talk) 07:51, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

No. A feature is not a behavior. --Auntof6 (talk) 08:22, 11 March 2016 (UTC)

I removed the entire feature thing altogether. There's no word to replace feature. So, removed it entirely. Angela Maureen (talk) 10:16, 11 March 2016 (UTC)