Talk:Tropical Storm Grace (2009)

This article contains a translation of Tropical Storm Grace (2009) from en.wikipedia.

Some areas possibly in need of improvement

Good job on the article. However, there are some parts that may require editing:

"the storm partly caused heavy rain that caused flooding."
- So what about the other part that caused the heavy rain?
  - Well, by the time Grace caused said heavy rain, it was already merging with another weather system. Can you think of a better way to word this? Juliancolton ∞ 15:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
    - How about "while merging with another weather system, the storm caused heavy rain that resulted in flooding."? Chenzw Talk 05:14, 2 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
"In real time, Grace was not named as a tropical storm until it reached the latitude 41.2°N."
- What does it exactly mean? Maybe "In real time" is redundant?
  - The National Hurricane Center recognized it as a tropical storm when it was located at 41.2°N. However in their post-storm review, they determined it had actually formed further south, which is why I differentiate between "real time" and later data. Juliancolton ∞ 15:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]