Talk:Tropical Storm Grace (2009)
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Some areas possibly in need of improvement[change source]
Good job on the article. However, there are some parts that may require editing:
- "the storm partly caused heavy rain that caused flooding."
- So what about the other part that caused the heavy rain?
- Well, by the time Grace caused said heavy rain, it was already merging with another weather system. Can you think of a better way to word this? Juliancolton ∞ 15:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
- How about "while merging with another weather system, the storm caused heavy rain that resulted in flooding."? Chenzw Talk 05:14, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
- Well, by the time Grace caused said heavy rain, it was already merging with another weather system. Can you think of a better way to word this? Juliancolton ∞ 15:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
- So what about the other part that caused the heavy rain?
- "In real time, Grace was not named as a tropical storm until it reached the latitude 41.2°N."
- What does it exactly mean? Maybe "In real time" is redundant?
- The National Hurricane Center recognized it as a tropical storm when it was located at 41.2°N. However in their post-storm review, they determined it had actually formed further south, which is why I differentiate between "real time" and later data. Juliancolton ∞ 15:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
- What does it exactly mean? Maybe "In real time" is redundant?
--Chenzw ∞ 14:34, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review! Juliancolton ∞ 15:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)