Talk:Tropical Storm Grace (2009)

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Some areas possibly in need of improvement[change source]

Good job on the article. However, there are some parts that may require editing:

  • "the storm partly caused heavy rain that caused flooding."
    • So what about the other part that caused the heavy rain?
      • Well, by the time Grace caused said heavy rain, it was already merging with another weather system. Can you think of a better way to word this? Juliancolton  15:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)
        • How about "while merging with another weather system, the storm caused heavy rain that resulted in flooding."? Chenzw  Talk  05:14, 2 April 2010 (UTC)
  • "In real time, Grace was not named as a tropical storm until it reached the latitude 41.2°N."
    • What does it exactly mean? Maybe "In real time" is redundant?
      • The National Hurricane Center recognized it as a tropical storm when it was located at 41.2°N. However in their post-storm review, they determined it had actually formed further south, which is why I differentiate between "real time" and later data. Juliancolton  15:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

--Chenzw  14:34, 1 April 2010 (UTC)

Thanks for the review! Juliancolton  15:40, 1 April 2010 (UTC)