Talk:Trouble (Coldplay song)

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GA review

Infobox

• 01. Replaced CD with CD single

 Done Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Lead

• 01. Parachutes needs the year of release in parenthesis ---> Parachutes (2000)
• 02. "The band wrote the song produced it along" - missing word? ---> "The band wrote the song and produced it along" [...]

 Fixed Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

• 03. "The word "trouble" is repeated many times in the lyrics of the song." - what does the lyrics mean though?

 Fixed Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Production

• 01. "The four members of Coldplay are credited as the co-writers of "Trouble". But, it was based on Martin's idea." - needs a source.

 Fixed Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

• 02. Parachutes needs the year of release in parenthesis ---> Parachutes (2000).
• 03. The whole second section needs a source. Unless ref#2 back these claims up. If they do please add them to the periods.

Ref 2 is basically for the last two paragraphs of the section. But I'm not going to add it to every sentence as it makes the article look clumsy and is really unnecessary. Our general reader is more eager to read the article than to check whether every line has a ref or not. Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

• 04. "engineer" needs a wikitory link. --> engineer. Some people may not know what a music engineer is.

  Linked to Wikipedia article.

• 05. "This was because then they were recording the album" - this does not make any sense?

  Changed to "...recording the album at that time"

• 06. The whole third section needs a source. Unless ref#2 back these claims up. If they do please add them to the periods.

  See point 03. Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Composition

• 01. "Like in the song "Yellow", Martin wrote "Trouble" with by using the word trouble many times." - huh moment. Maybe something like this? "Similar to "Yellow", Martin wrote "Trouble" by using the word trouble many times in the song."

  Changed to "Like in the song "Yellow", in the song "Trouble", the word trouble is used many times."

• 02. Wikilink beats per minute

   Done Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Release

• 01. "Very few CDs of the single was released." - maybe like Very few copies of the single were released.

  Actually, I had accidentally changed the meaning in an attempt to simplify. Now fixed. Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

• 02. "Yellow"'s. ---> "Yellow"{{'}}s

   Done Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

• 03. "It has reached" --> "It had reached" - used past-tense tone.

   Fixed Removed has. Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Music videos

• 01. " It was themed like Wild West." ---> It's theme was the Wild West.

   Fixed Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

• 02. Breakthrough Video ---> "Breakthrough Video".

   Done Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Charts

This whole section needs reliable sources.

Some added, more will be added later. Pmlineditor (t · c · l) 06:49, 11 September 2011 (UTC)

Final thoughts

The article is great and well written for simple readers. Just address the following concerns and the article can soon be a WP:GA. However, since this is my first review, I'll ask another editor to overlook the article and give a second opinion. For now, I am placing the article  On hold for seven days. Best, AJona1992 (talk) 17:18, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

On hold for seven days? What? Goblin 17:23, 10 September 2011 (UTC) I ♥ Belinda!

That's what English Wiki GAN are given. Unless here its different? AJona1992 (talk) 17:25, 10 September 2011 (UTC)

Completely different. They're PGAs for starters, rather than GANs. Really strongly suggest you read up on how our process works before contributing further. Thanks. Goblin 17:26, 10 September 2011 (UTC) I ♥ Bsadowski1!