Talk:United States Declaration of Independence
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Why were we setting up this new goverment and what did it stand for? Were we doing this for a good reason?
the constitution and the bill of rights[change source]
what was the amendment process and where was the declaration of independence written. why do we have 7principals of government?220.127.116.11 01:52, 25 January 2007 (UTC)
this page needs major re-writing[change source]
Dear experts in American history, It is a real disgrace to have one of the finest pages in American History written in a second-grade English. Can someone do better?
- Er, you do understand that this is the Simple English Wikipedia, where we are supposed to write in second-grade English? We are writing for children and those for who English is a second language. Cassandra 22:12, 23 June 2008 (UTC)
our country's leaders[change source]
"The American Constitution and the Bill of Rights are there as well, hopefully leading our country's leaders in their times of judgement." I would say, this not the way an encyclopedic artical should be written. Not all readers are US-citizens ...
- "Hopefully leading our country's leaders" is inappropriate for an encyclopedia in and of itself. I've removed the section. :) – Katerenka (talk • contribs) 20:59, 11 October 2009 (UTC)