User talk:Paynethymaya

Karl Davis[change source]

Paynethymaya, it is easy to see that Karl Davis is important to you and you are knowledgeable about him. A couple of hints. This is Simple English Wikipedia. The language has to be simple. That means easy words and easy sentences. See the Help pages. Extended quotes do not often work because they are not simple. Also, they can be original research. Finally, references. I removed the last few. Instagram and social media are generally not reliable sources like magazines, news sites, and books are. But, even then, those references must clearly support the sentence in the article. A book or magazine about the AIDS crisis is about the disease, but the ones you linked did not clearly tell about Davis' death. You need to cite a specific article of a magazine or page number of a book. I hope that helps. --Gotanda (talk) 23:57, 30 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]

Also, please do not add links to the English Wikipedia in articles, as the goal is to keep everything simple. Options are to either create a (simple) article here, leave them as red-links, or to not link them. Let me know if you want any more help on your Karl Davis article :) Computer Fizz (talk) 19:11, 31 December 2019 (UTC)[reply]