User talk:Aaqib/The Amazing World of Gumball

Isn't it good enough to move back into an article?Reception123 / Receptie123 (talk) 17:43, 19 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

No, I am still working on the page. I think it will take a long time to move it to an article. --Aaqib Hola! 17:44, 19 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Ok.Then, you should move it when your ready.Reception123 / Receptie123 (talk) 17:45, 19 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

If you want to, message me and I can review when you're ready? Kennedy ^(talk) 19:29, 19 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Agree I will ask you first if I am ready to move it! --Aaqib Hola! 20:42, 19 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I have nothing else to add to the page, time to move it? Or should we just work on it more? --Aaqib ♥ Hola! 19:25, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah, i think it could be time, Aaqib. You have worked hard on this article.Reception123 / Receptie123 (talk) 05:11, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

But we do have 1 problem, illustration. Do you any idea for illustration? --Aaqib Hola! 20:15, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

We need to link the page. --Aaqib Hola! 21:05, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

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Not that you asked me, but I hope you don't mind if I offer some comments.

The headings for Elmore kids, school staff, and other characters shoukd be level 3 instead of level 2.
The sections about the characters need to be a lot shorter, or moved to a separate article.
Some references would be good, especially in the "Episode information" section, and especially if you can find some reliable sources. IMDB is not considered a very reliable source, but it would be better than nothing.
There are a few links to disambiguation pages (also called dab pages) that could be cleaned up. I only noticed them because I use some JavaScript code that highlights them. The dab solver tool is good for fixing multiple dab links -- let me know if you'd like help taking care of them.
I suggest adding an "Other websites" section, with links to the IMDB entry and to the official website, if thete is one.
When you move this to mainspace, please add categories. Don't add them before, unless you add them as disabled. If you want, I'll find the appropriate categories for you.

That's probably more than enough for now. --Auntof6 (talk) 08:14, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry Auntof6, were not removing any information. --Aaqib Hola! 20:24, 24 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry for the delay. The points Auntof6 make are good, so take note. The article is improving greatly, so well done. My first thought was that it needs references. There are currently no references at all. Wikipedia:References can help you with that. Also its still just a mass of text; the information on the characters is really quite in depth. A possible thing is to give a short amount of information then under the header have a 'See also' link for something like List of The Amazing World of Gumball characters - there you can have as much information as you want for each character. It also still needs wikified. There are literally no links (red or blue) from the Elmore kids section. Good work on it so far. Fix these points and I'll move it back for you. Good luck. Kennedy ^(talk) 11:11, 26 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Illustration comments[change source]

Any ideas about Illustration on the page such as like adding new items or images to the following page? --Aaqib ♥ Hola! 19:34, 21 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

But we do have 1 problem, illustration. Do you any idea for illustration? --Aaqib Hola! 20:15, 22 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Yeah.We need to find illustrations.But where?--Reception123 / Receptie123 (talk) 06:06, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]

On the English Wikipedia there is only this illustration (not this one from simple) for the whole article.Reception123 / Receptie123 (talk) 06:08, 23 June 2013 (UTC)[reply]