User talk:Iron-crocodile Tony

Shanghainese food

"Shanghainese food" is the traditional food of Shanghai,China.Examples are xiao long bao,spiced broad beans,hairy crabs.

Xiao long bao is made of pork and flour.It's a kind of pastry.It's frash and a little sweet.It's small and white.It's very delicious.

Spiced broad bean is made of beans flavored with aniseed and cinnamon.It's sweet.Nearly people know it. A person who named Zhang Acheng made it in six years ago.It has long histry.

Hairy crabs are grown by us in clean pool,or they will die.We can't put frogs,snakes or mouths in the pool,or they will die.

Why is this here? It should be at Shanghainese food. — Mr Spear (talk) 08:21, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

Quick deletion of Talk:Baix

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What did you write?

Why did you write it on the talk page of a French town instead of at Shanghainese food? — Mr Spear (talk) 08:21, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

September 2017 reversion

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September 2017 reversion

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You have been asked many times not to add information on Shanghainese food to pages that are not appropriate. Please do not do it again. StevenJ81 (talk) 15:12, 27 September 2017 (UTC)

Tony, you do not seem to have been asked even once, let alone many times, to not add information to other pages. You were just spammed with generic error messages that you didn't understand, so don't worry so much about the rude man.

That said, why on earth are you writing about Shanghainese food on the talk page of the main page instead of at Shanghainese food? This is an encyclopedia. You need to write about things in the right place, not in completely random places. You know that, so why have you done it several times now? — Mr Spear (talk) 08:21, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

Account names

We talked about this at User talk:Iron-Shark Tony. Do NOT make another account, thanks. Use the name you already have and send me messages when you change something so I can look at it. — Mr Spear (talk) 08:21, 5 October 2017 (UTC)

Use the right name

I moved your article about National Day (国庆节) from Talk:National Day (which is for talking about all national days) to National Day of the People's Republic of China) (中华人民共和国). If you aren't sure where to write something, write it here on your talk page and we can move it together. In this case, you could have gone to National Day, looked for the "People's Republic of China" and used its red link to know where to start your page. — Mr Spear (talk) 01:26, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Explaining things

Don't be too personal

Again, when you explain something, you don't want to be too personal or use your opinions:

Chinese National Day is very interesting.

is true for you but not for everyone.

Be especially careful about the first sentence. You should clearly say what it is. It is not "interesting"; it is a holiday to celebrate __[something]__ on __[some day]__. — Mr Spear (talk) 01:26, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

DO NOT USE BAIDU TRANSLATION

The earliest found in western jin dynasty The western jin dynasty writer found in five governors such as theory The article has a National Day's alone, the main worry about mo and its harm China's feudal era National festival event, a great deal too imperial throne's birth (the qing dynasty emperor's birthday for viva section) and so on, thus the emperor of ancient China acceded to the throne Birthday is called the National Day, today call countries establish the anniversary of National Day on October 1, 1949, is the anniversary of the founding of new China.

is not English. The words don't make any sense. When you wrote about xiazi dawushen and youtiao, it was a little better but still very bad. It's clear you just used a computer to translate: none of the sentences work in English and many of the words are wrong.

Use words that you know to say things you understand. If you don't understand, talk to me. If you can't say it, say it an easier way using words you already know. If you don't know the easier words, look those up in a dictionary. Don't just use a machine translation. They don't work. — Mr Spear (talk) 01:43, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Grammar

Use spaces

Remember that there is a space (空间) after a period (句号). Not

Chinese National Day is very interesting.In particular...

but

Chinese National Day is a holiday to celebrate __[something]__ on __[some day]__. In particular...

 — Mr Spear (talk) 01:26, 8 October 2017 (UTC)

Use big letters

Remember that the names of people, places, and companies will use capital letters most of the time. Not

western jin dynasty... the qing dynasty emperor...

but

Western Jin dynasty... the Qing emperor...

 — Mr Spear (talk) 01:26, 8 October 2017 (UTC)