Talk:Neptune

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Talk page required as article is a proposed very good article. LIAM / LIAM mailbox 21:58, 1 November 2007 (UTC)

This article is good for regular English Wikipedia, but for Simple, its too advanced in level. For blue tag, we might want to you easier language, so, everybody can understand.--Freewayguy Call? Fish 19:52, 1 August 2008 (UTC)

PVGA comments by Barras[change source]

General
  • Fix all references and use cite web...
  • Use cite web as well for other websites
    • I'll do these later as they're a bit boring ;) . Pmlineditor  16:29, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
lead
  • Neptune has four rings which are had to see from the Earth. - This sentence sounds very odd.
     Fixed Pmlineditor  16:47, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
  • and is a little bit heavier than Uranus. Define "a little bit".
  • The astronomical symbol for the planet is Astronomical symbol for Neptune. - I would remove this sentence. I don't really like symbols in sentences.
     Fixed Pmlineditor  16:47, 13 October 2009 (UTC)
  • Neptune's atmosphere (a layer of gas floating above planets) is mostly made up of hydrogen and helium (two types of gases), with small amounts of methane which is makes the planet blue. - Too long and the end of the sentence sounds odd.
     Fixed--Chenzw  Talk  11:24, 22 October 2009 (UTC)

More later. Barras (talk) 09:38, 12 October 2009 (UTC)